Hey fuck face.
It builds pretty well, I like it, everything goes together well. The song feels minimalistic, but it goes with the mood. Also it feels finished, move on, you've got better shit to come. Practice and progression leads to triumph. Good job and good fun.
You think so? Well finished or not, critiques help future works more than previous anyways. I did move on. after about 10-20 minutes I started a new one, and normally I put at least one day+ of work into my music, but I worked really fast on this one. It's already up!
What the fuck?
Did you just download and midi file and put shitty instruments to it? 5 minutes later an audio submission for Newgrounds...
No way, so lifeless.
No fucking way in hell a marching band or anyone serious would play this. It's beyond simple, did you even try? You've got a basic hook surrounded by nothing but a basic measure. Very discouraging and like said before bland.
TMBG
An autistic They Might Be Giants. I enjoyed the song, yes the vocals sucked and the guitar was lackluster. But you tried something different and gave it your all, shitific. Very passible, nothing stands out.
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